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    Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Luca on Sun Aug 21, 2011 7:04 am

    Currently working on a story. I have an account on this site: http://www.wattpad.com
    It's a neat place. Make an account and start posting/writing stories.
    Made an account. Link here: http://www.wattpad.com/user/CometTheLucario
    I already made a Oneshot, "A Battle To Remember."
    I'm currently working on, "Supersonic," a story I plan to make a good size.
    Link here: http://www.wattpad.com/2025090-supersonic
    Id like some reviews
    I'll post up a new link each time I make more chapters.
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    Post by Luca on Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:31 am

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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Lime on Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:44 am

    Im not going to lie...but when I saw this, it made me burst out laughing...
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Luca on Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:47 am

    Why's everyone against me right now? D:
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Lime on Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:57 am

    No one's againts you, it's just you don't seem like a writer.
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    Post by Luca on Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:05 am

    D: well jeez that did a dent in my motivation. Besides, you're no better at all. You wont even stick to it. And besides, its THREE CHAPTERS IN.
    And for your information, I won young author award. THREE TIMES.
    Chapter three http://www.wattpad.com/2031796-chapter-3-meeting
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Lime on Wed Aug 24, 2011 8:10 am

    Meh, I get bored with the story and even when I do have the motivation, it dies down the next day then I forget about it
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Okuu on Wed Aug 24, 2011 8:35 am

    I agree with lime. Also, why not type this stuff on the topic instead of using a link? AT&T is capping the data my dad and I use, so we can't really afford this kind of extra data usage.


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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Luca on Wed Aug 24, 2011 9:24 am

    Neeeerd
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Lime on Wed Aug 24, 2011 9:47 am

    Being a neeeeerrrrd is cool
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Luca on Wed Aug 24, 2011 9:54 am

    I know
    I'm a nerd too but he's a bigger one
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Okuu on Thu Aug 25, 2011 10:04 am

    Regardless, you will never meet a bigger nerd than Star. He's a pure-bred and proud nerd.


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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Luca on Thu Aug 25, 2011 10:23 am

    Off topic for a second, how?
    What's he do?
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Okuu on Thu Aug 25, 2011 10:39 am

    He's a legendary nerd. To geeks like me, he's the definition of evil. To nerds like my sister, he's a deity. He sticks out from the crowd like a sore thumb growing out of your forehead. If you want to know what he does, just stalk ask him


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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Luca on Fri Aug 26, 2011 6:17 am

    Back on topic, no new chapters for a while
    Just because don't wanna and dont have time
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Okuu on Fri Aug 26, 2011 6:30 am

    When you wrote the intro, what controlled substance did your bullies slip into your beverage?


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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Luca on Fri Aug 26, 2011 9:31 am

    ........ What? What was wrong? It was with an intro similar that I won the my Young GA Authors award?
    What was wrong in it?
    And I have no bullies.
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Okuu on Fri Aug 26, 2011 9:57 am

    The storyline...SONIC SAID AMY WAS HIS GIRLFRIEND!


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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Luca on Fri Aug 26, 2011 10:22 am

    So? Rhys does it all the time.
    And I support Sonamy
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Okuu on Sat Aug 27, 2011 5:42 am

    I mostly skim the first few paragraphs, and then my interest dies out. Also, when writing a novel, short story, or something like that, type like this:
    "You need to type like this when typing what people say," said Daniel.
    After reading how Comet used roleplay format for people's actions, Daniel had a major
    headache.
    The way you typed that stuff honestly did leave my with a headache.


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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Luca on Sat Aug 27, 2011 10:20 am

    ...... I'm seeing your jerk-o-meter increase with every word.
    Hows this mr perfect.
    http://www.wattpad.com/2068538-fireflies?d=ud
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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Okuu on Sat Aug 27, 2011 11:43 pm

    Much better.


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    Re: Comet's Writing Topic

    Post by Luca on Sun Aug 28, 2011 6:08 am

    Thank you.

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